Monday, December 26, 2011

I've got so much more to give

I didn't do enough
But I still did a lot
I gave you my heart
Our souls bound as one
And then you left
Never to return
I waited on you
While my heart wept a lot

If only you'd stayed long enough
You'd have known
I've got so much more to give

These memories will be
With me till the end of my days
I mended my ways
I got better
And better I would get
In this time and the next
I would love you without rest
It wouldn't always be
Rainbows and butterflies
But if you'd have stayed


If only you'd stayed long enough
You'd have known
I've got so much more to give


I can't lay the blame on you
No i can't
No matter how many ways
You find to say
It wasn't me it was you
I know better than that
Situations
Circumstances
Trials and tribulations
I'd have found a way to work around
And make it a better life
A life full of love
A life so complete
A life where there'd be a lot of you n me


I didn't do enough
But I still did a lot
I gave you my heart
Our souls bound as one
And then you left
Never to return
I waited on you
While my heart wept a lot

If only you'd stayed long enough
You'd have known
I've got so much more to give

10 comments:

  1. Namz - Thank you :-) now to find someone to give the music...

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  2. Love the way you have presented your feelings, awesome piece :)

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  3. wonderful!!!keep up the good job'amazing piece :)

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  4. wonderful!!!keep up the good job'amazing piece :)

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  5. Nonchalantly exposing brutalities of a broken heart.Very well put.=)

    An Ounce of Eternity

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  6. thank you sappy but what makes you think they are specifically MY feelings? ;-)

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  7. thank you chelle, i will keep writing :)

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  8. thank you hari, do see if someone will be willing to compose the music for this one :)

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  9. an ounce of eternity, thank you, words are all i have :)

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